October 20, 2020, 06:52:23 AM

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Offline Peron Silderan

A Fantasy Trilogy - Vellum I: Scrolls of Vilenzia (Book 1)
« on: June 30, 2020, 06:24:02 AM »
Book Title - The First Time They Took Their Last Breath

Hi all check out the link below :). Let me know what you think...

Much appreciated.

http://kck.st/3dF1hGA

W.M Henshaw

Offline DCuervonegro

Re: A Fantasy Trilogy - Vellum I: Scrolls of Vilenzia (Book 1)
« Reply #1 on: July 04, 2020, 04:22:51 AM »
Seems nice, but the premise is hard to discern from what you have. Can. you tell us something more, like what kind of fantasy this is? High fantasy? Epic? What are your protagonists like? How many do you have? Just to get to know you and the story a bit better.

Offline DCuervonegro

Re: A Fantasy Trilogy - Vellum I: Scrolls of Vilenzia (Book 1)
« Reply #2 on: July 04, 2020, 04:23:25 AM »
Also, sorry for the double post, what are the inspirations?