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Post your thoughts on this chapters here. (Chapter Twenty Three- End)
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According to some,* heroic deaths are admirable things

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Finished it last night. I feel like after roughly the half-way mark, the narrative petered out and all that lovely build-up was slowly squandered. My predictions were pretty much completely off, which is fine, but the things that happened were basically unpredictable -- as in they didn't make sense. The final fight culminated in some sort of Hollywood blockbuster scene, complete with a long conversation in the middle of a fight and people turning up to save the day unexpectedly and without explanation.

Vasya makes a foolish and quite selfish decision to send Frost off just as he's needed the most (from what we've been told, the fate of the world hangs in the balance) -- and she nor anyone else doesn't pay for it in any way.
Instead, she manages to call all the house spirits of the village, even though there was absolutely no setup for that whatsoever. For that to have been believable, I would liked to have seen her going about the village, helping them out, perhaps convincing the children of the village to help their household spirits, or something like that, earlier in the book. But no, they just turn up, because "surprise!" And then her father turns up, because "surprise!", and just saves the day in a way that hasn't really been set up for, either. Bear has been set free through the sacrifice of someone who fears him and sees him, supposedly a super-powerful act. Yet he can be banished again with the sacrifice of a single mortal? And I despise the Hollywoodesque trope of people turning up at just the right time without any warning or explanation.

Then she decides to go off on some adventure riding about on her horse because apparently the dowry gift she refused is still waiting for her, so money won't be a problem? Meh.

Too many questions.

I really loved the setting, the writing, and the setup. But in the last quarter or so I feel like it all went up in smoke, which just makes me sad as now I don't even feel like continuing the series.

3/5 stars.
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The Fir groove house is definitely a fairytale house , so you should never eat food in a fairy tale house as I’ve heard you never get back to the real world if you do hehe

That’s a turn up for the books Konstantin finds the truth of the bringer of the storm and yet this holy man still does his bidding.

I didn’t like Vasya summoning the house spirits to her aid in the forest , she was always more demanding then loving, Vasya treated the house Fae  more like servants than as a friends.

I agree with Magnus about her father just turning up as well in the right spot  just because the tree is enchanted.

I still enjoyed the book and will carry on with the trilogy:

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I pretty much liked when spirits came. It would have been better if they came withouth Vasya's call. It was like, I helped you and now it's your turn type of investment.

I believe this novel could have been better with some minor touches but it is understandable because it is the writer's first novel.

I liked it overall, 4/5. I'll probably read the rest later in the year.

Thanks to the all participants :)
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'Yes' said Caladan Brood. 'You never learn'

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Glad you liked the book  Isos 😀 now to get Ryan’s book.
According to some,* heroic deaths are admirable things

* Generally those who don't have to do it.Politicians and writers spring to mind

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