February 22, 2018, 04:41:39 PM

Author Topic: Location Description: How much is to much?  (Read 313 times)

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Re: Location Description: How much is to much?
« Reply #15 on: February 15, 2018, 07:03:38 PM »
For description and exposition both, less is more. Too little is better than too much. Don't put anything in there that isn't necessary for the story.

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