Got my EntryPlus last week, some great feedback from Autumn2May highlighting one of the things I was most concerned about (a large cast for a short story). I know where I went wrong (too much time setting up too big a cast, not enough forward movement) and have ideas where I need to go.
First thing on the list is a re-read of The Fool Jobs by Joe Abercrombie - which in part was the reason I had a large cast - and see how he managed them and made a short story work.
Thanks to everyone involved with the EntryPlus, unpaid and in your own time shows a great level of dedication to the project.