Finish this story Matthew, but don't miss this month either!! I really liked your style, I'm curious to see more from you.
Now how do you guys feel about a critique thread for this month?
I think I've got an idea for this one, I'll add it to the discussion thread of the new one.
As for the novella, It's come along a ways since you saw it last, sitting at about 11k words and just plugging away with a little buildup before the final chapter (start to finish fight scene).
Critics are always welcome for me too
