In retrospect, that might be a little overly dark for this crowd....
A mother "voodooing" her son to kill the father? I want to read that now!
You shouldn't have shared that already, wipe it, expand and enter it. Great idea and agree definitely NOLA
Aweee Lady Ty-- if only I hadn't thought of it 5 days after the contest closed

I need to learn to write 1500 words without killing half the characters....
Imagine when you write 150.000
GRRM would blush.
Yeah, about that.... that's why my 100k word WIP has such a large cast of characters... I need some to survive to the end!!