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Re: Part 4: Upon the Ashen Blade, Ch 59 to the End
« Reply #15 on: August 02, 2016, 10:12:39 PM »
Also shivers at the thought when this 200 daughters all become teenagers at the same time  ::)

Sebastian would have to work his socks off the entire year just for the birthday's gifts.

On the other hand there would be so much cake. Hmmm!
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Re: Part 4: Upon the Ashen Blade, Ch 59 to the End
« Reply #16 on: August 03, 2016, 11:10:59 AM »
i realized i hadn't posted since i finished it.  it was so thoroughly enjoyable.

best part tho?  totally sebastian's 200 brood daughters and how incredibly cool it was that they moved back to the mountain.

i can imagine the conversation in your head when you wrote it:

you:  "what's the craziest thing that could happen?"
other you:  "sebastian flirts with being evil."
you:  "i like it, but what's even crazier?"
other you:  "that his blood spawns a host of evil warriors?"
you:  "nice!  more!"
other you:  "what if they were hundreds of demon warrior women and he was their dad?!"
you:  "yes!  yes!  yes!"
other you:  ". . . and what if he co-opted them for his personal army?!"
you:  "omg!  perfect!"
other you:  ". . . and took over the home of the knights that kicked him out?!?"
you:  *scribble*  *scribble*  *scribble*
other you:  *maniacal laughter*

 ;D It's uncanny, really.
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