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The Prince of Cats:Chapter 19-End
« on: March 30, 2020, 12:55:18 PM »
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Re: The Prince of Cats:Chapter 19-End
« Reply #1 on: April 08, 2020, 08:46:34 PM »
A joyful ending, bittersweet as such. The ending was perfect for the book. I was praying that Jawad and Zaida won't get together as it would have ruined the entire feel and happy things turned out the way it was.

I was able to guess that Jawad was the Prince of Cats. The problem with the plot @Quill was the total lack of focus on the Prince of Cats itself. For a vaunted adversary, he was ignored all along and it's obvious to deduce why. If there were some counter moves by the Prince, kinda of cat and mouse to say...the twist would have been harder to guess. 

Special appreciation to your writing skills. The world building was excellent we actually get a feel for a persian setting, just right.  The vein of humour makes it all the more refreshing!

A fun read, overall.
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Re: The Prince of Cats:Chapter 19-End
« Reply #2 on: April 11, 2020, 08:03:28 PM »
Finished , I would have liked to seen the aftermath of the battle between all the factions at the end

The Jawad and Zaida relationship didn’t work for me  I felt it needed more scenes of them getting to know each other better i don’t know why she cared about him so much.  I felt more sad about Jawad and Salah relationship ending.

I liked the story and the setting

According to some,* heroic deaths are admirable things

* Generally those who don't have to do it.Politicians and writers spring to mind

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