Authors, Reviews and Commenting

Most Order In Chaos by JohnKyoof the advice I’ve seen for authors is not to read reviews, although by no means all. I’m going to disagree and say it’s a useful practice but you’d be wise to put on your armour before you do and remember that a review is an opinion. One person’s opinion, and that person could be anybody. A review might be one backed by a great deal of education and experience in the genre or it might not. It might also be backed by some personal experience that has nothing to do with your story but which heavily colours a reviewer’s reaction to it. Be ready to take every individual review, whether it damns you or sings high praises, with a great big pinch of salt. I was, for example, quite pleased by my first five star review for The Black Mausoleum, until I read it and found it was simply an observation that the book wasn’t available for kindle. It was courteous of the gentleman who wrote it – there are plenty of one-star reviews for exactly the same reason.

It does happen that a single review, good or bad, can tell you something important about your writing. The most eviscerating review I’ve ever had is this one (we all secretly like to show off our scars). It’s an outlier review by and large and I have no idea, really, why that particular book didn’t work for that particular reviewer. But the savagery aside, he has a point in the penultimate paragraph. It’s a weakness and I won’t do it again and I kind of wish my editor had made a fuss about it. Speaking of dealing with bad reviews, there’s a half-decent piece here, which says much the same as I would say. But I’m lazy so I give you a link instead. 😛

Typewriter by AndrekaPhotographyThe big trouble with taking any review in isolation is that you don’t know whether it’s an outlier or not because you’ve got nothing else to compare against. So when you your Special Forces vs. Alien Invasion novel gets slated because your sweary SAS men don’t use exactly authentic language and models of firearm, this might not matter for 99% of readers. But it might matter greatly for one person who reviewed it and so that’s what they picked on. It’s a thing you could change if you wanted to, next time, with a bit of research, but you only know that it mattered to one person.

What you need, in order to have perspective, are the ten other reviews that make no mention at all of authenticity and say things like ‘gripping pace’ and ‘furious action sequences.’ So my advice on reviews is to read them all and take each one individually (good or bad) with a huge pinch of salt and only pay attention when someone brings up something very specific. Otherwise it’s the trends that matter. One review that says your characters are great but your worldbuilding is shallow doesn’t mean all that much. Ten reviews out of ten that all say the same thing are starting to tell you something. And even if half your reviews say your worldbuilding is shallow and the other half say it’s detailed, that’s telling you something too – probably that the people who care about worldbuilding think it’s shallow and the people who don’t…don’t.

What you do with all this is up to you. Change or don’t change, the art remains yours. No one has to act on feedback but it’s generally wise to at least listen to it. Generally, I find, it’s the bad – or perhaps worst of all the mediocre – reviews that are most informative. Which leads on to the entirely other matter of commenting on a review…

Creator: “Look! I made something.”
Reviewer: “Ew! What a streaming pile of crap! My eyes, my eyes!”
Creator: “Hey, dickwad, I made this – how dare you criticise me.”
Reviewer: “That’s what a review is, dumbass.”
Reviewer runs around the internet to all her friends pointing a finger and yelling: “Look! Creator is being a jackass.”
Creator runs around the internet to all her friends pointing a finger and yelling: “Look! Reviewer is being a jackass.”
Random strangers who have no idea who either Creator or Reviewer are take up arms and renew centuries-old feuds.
Scotland breaks from the union.
Twitter breaks.
World economic collapse ensues.

Set Your World On Fire by Boy_WonderThis exchange helps no one, least of all other authors, thanks. I don’t buy the existence of some arbitrary distinction between “reader-space” and “author-space” but I suggest that any author who wants to comment on a review should have a good long hard think about why they feel that need and particularly why they feel that need to respond in public. A published novel has been released to an open audience who are equally entitled to speak back – and you do want reviews, right? You want people to have heard of your work. And my personal view is that a reviewer is making a choice too by placing a review in a public space such as a magazine or an open-access blog on the internet but I’d also accept there’s a difference: it’s a different sort of public space.

Publishing a novel is like posting a notice on the town noticeboard – it’s as public as can be. If you’re lucky enough to have a review in the national press then maybe that’s close to the same. A review site on the internet strikes me as more like a pub. It’s technically a public space but it has its local regular clientele and they may not appreciate your intrusion. You can walk into Mordor and jump up and down shouting, “Sauron is totally an arse” if you like but don’t be surprised when a bazillion orcs jump on you.

Fairy Tales by kameronelisabethSometimes someone will say something in a review that really, really pisses you off. When that happens, please just walk away for the good of all of us (and dear lord, don’t ever reply to a one-star review unless you have nothing better to do with your life than be pointlessly angry). Sometimes a reviewer will says something that’s just plain wrong (often through no fault of their own, release dates being a common one). If you feel a correction is necessary, please do so courteously and with respect even if you don’t feel like it. Now and then a reviewer will say something that makes you deeply curious as to why. Perhaps, on those occasions, a private approach would serve both parties better.

Reviews are there to be learned from, some more than others. Some reviewers are internet-jackasses and some are delightful and some just have good days and bad days and exactly the same goes for authors. We’re all humans, after all.

Title image by JohnKyo.

Editor’s Note: When the article was first posted, the links were accidently omitted. The live links have now been added in.

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By Stephen Deas

Stephen Deas lives in South-east England with his wife, said two small children and a desire for cats. He is the author of the Memory of Flames and Thief-Taker's Apprentice series and continues to pretend to be other people, most frequently A Responsible Parent(TM). Family life has rather curtailed any experiments in domestic rocketry, which is probably why dragons have such appeal. You can learn more about him and his books on his website or follow him on Twitter.

4 thoughts on “Authors, Reviews and Commenting”
  1. I seems to me that the reviewer in the above example is as arrogant and butthurt as the writer. It makes me wonder about the psyche of certain reviewers. Do they expect to be listened to? How do they feel when their review is rejected by the public who goes ahead and makes a bestseller out of something they’ve stamped as crap?

    I’m put in mind of the movie reviewer, Leonard Maltin. His review of the film The Usual Suspects, for one of his books, seems to take umbrage with the fact that the audience likes a film he finds flaws in. It’s as if he can’t accept that the viewer of the film doesn’t see it the way he sees it.

  2. Nice article. As a writer new to the actually-being-(self)-published game, I’ve found I have a love/hate relationship with reviews; many of them are encouraging, even enlightening, but even the great ones make me feel a bit down as I mull over everything they didn’t say. After having several beta readers that I could always press for opinions on specific things, it’s been an effort to remain professional and not start prodding at the reviewers to explain themselves. I hope the raw-nerve sensation of it goes away eventually, but I don’t think I’ll ever stop reading them, if only because they make me examine what I could do better in the next book.

  3. I’ve heard that advice for writers: don’t read your reviews. But of course you WILL read those reviews, and hurt over each bad one, until you are so successful any given review barely moves the needle. (And many writers continue to read them even then.) So not reading your reviews must be a sign of great success, right? . Anyway, Mr. Deas, I really enjoyed this post and agree about looking for trends in what reviewers are saying. One other point — reviews of one and two stars seem to make readers less wary — they imply the reviews are not all bought-and-paid-for. So perversely, you might want a few to appear on your book. Heck, have you seen the way some folks trash Tolstoy, Alice Munro, Dickens and Kipling?

  4. Well said!

    I can understand both sides of the “do or don’t read reviews” debate. One one hand, you run the risk of getting hurt when somebody trashes your labour of love, and I can totally understand why that’s an undesirable thing. On the other hand, good reviews (not merely positive reviews, but well-thought-out reviews) are often highly constructive, talking about the good and the bad of a book and why something did or didn’t work, and it can book a good jumping off point for improvement.

    And in the example you gave of the interaction between the author and the reviewer… I always found that argument somewhat ironic in that often the reviewer will talk negatively about the book, but as soon as someone does to them what they just did, talking negatively about their review, suddenly it’s a bad thing and free speech arguments get brought into the game and the Internet explodes. Things vary depending on what’s said, of course, but that’s how a lot of those arguments seem to me. “I’m allowed to say it, but nobody else is.”

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