If you were to meet a writer on the street, you could be forgiven for expecting a disorganized person who is generally unable to function at the level normally expected of an adult human being.

Harsh, I know. But when it comes to writing, many amateur writers seem incapable of the most basic tasks (and I count myself in this group). Forget actually writing a decent novel. Some of us can’t put pen to paper, let alone finish our work. And if a writer can’t even commence work on her tour de force, how can she expect to finish it?

Curiously, these same people are functioning members of society provided there’s no writing involved. They manage to wash themselves, get dressed in the morning, raise children, and even — shock horror! — hold down jobs with deadlines and KPIs.

So why is it that when it comes to doing what they love best, many writers turn into pale, underachieving reflections of themselves?

I asked some amateur writers what gets between them and their work, and this is what they said.

1. Not enough time

Not having enough hours in the day is a commonly reported reason for failing to meet writing goals.

This isn’t surprising given most amateur writers barely earn enough from their work to cover the cost of printing and posting their manuscripts. When you’re working a day job or raising a family, it’s hard to find the spare time just to scratch yourself.

And let’s face it, modern life with all its distractions and pressures is hardly conducive to writing. Sitting in front of a computer at night isn’t the most enticing proposition after a long day in the office, and good writing requires the kind of deep concentration most of us can only muster in decent chunks of quiet time. If only we could all wile away our summer afternoons putting quill to parchment like Shakespeare did.

For many writers, not having enough time is a real problem, but I also suspect most of us have used it as a cop out at some stage. I’d be a rich man if I had a penny for every time I’ve heard someone complain they’re too busy, only to see them on the sofa watching TV an hour later. If you want something badly enough, you’ll find time for it, even if something else has to be sacrificed.

Unfortunately for many of us, that thing is sleep.

2. Lacking motivation

The path to publication can be long and difficult. Even if you manage to polish your work into something worthy of publication, there’s no guarantee it will ever see the light of day. Publishers aren’t likely to be interested in something they don’t see as a commercial proposition, and it’s no secret in the industry that sometimes even the best book will go unpublished. And even if a publishing house is willing to take it, the royalties are unlikely to stretch much further than beer money for many writers.

What this means is that not only is writing a difficult process suited only to those with a lot of patience, it is also an industry offering very little in the way of financial reward to the majority of writers. No surprise, then, that many writers struggle to find the motivation to keep writing. Producing a novel takes hundreds, if not thousands, of hours, and every minute can be hard to bear when the voice in your head keeps insisting there’s no point, it will never get published and you’ll have wasted all this effort for nothing.

Of course there are other rewards, such as the joy of writing for its own sake, and giving pleasure to your readers.

That’s enough for some people, and they’re the ones less likely to suffer from this particular problem.

3. Writer’s block

Writer’s block can take many forms. Sometimes the words just don’t flow. On other days, every word you put on the page seems like the most trite, tedious drivel you’ve ever read. Or perhaps there’s a plot problem stalling the work that you can’t resolve. At other times, there’s no inspiration, no magic to keep you going and interested in your own work.

Most amateur writers I’ve spoken to report suffering from writer’s block regularly, but fortunately it doesn’t last long. Experienced writers develop coping techniques that can help them break through, such as listening to music, reviewing previously written work, taking time out, or approaching the problem from a different angle. Others find that it passes without any conscious effort.

For some unlucky few, writer’s block can develop into a more serious problem. I’ve heard of writers who haven’t produced more than a paragraph of decent prose for six months or more, despite their best efforts. They choke on every sentence, or analyze their work endlessly, finding so many flaws they have to start again.

For them, the block might be a symptom of something more insidious: self doubt.

4. Self doubt

This is sometimes the hidden cause why writers fail to meet their goals, and often they don’t even know it. Lacking motivation in your writing? Perhaps you secretly don’t believe your work is good enough to ever get published. It’s no fun pouring hundreds of hours into a manuscript that you think will spend the rest of its life gathering dust in the bottom draw. Or perhaps you can’t seem to write anything good lately? Chances are you’re too critical of your own work.

In some ways this could be called the malaise of the journeyman writer. Often when a person first starts writing, they are full of confidence in their own newfound abilities. How could anyone not find their work amazing? Anyone who dares criticize just doesn’t appreciate how good they are or what they are trying to achieve.

Conversely, the master author has achieved enough success that their writing abilities can’t be doubted, at least not rationally. No matter how low their self esteem, they can’t deny that at least others seem to find their work worth reading.

The journeyman writer is arguably in a more difficult position. As the writer matures, he starts to see the flaws in his own style. He knows that he is getting better at his craft, but he hasn’t achieved enough success to be sure that other people like his work. He doesn’t have the brash arrogance of the beginner, but neither does he have the hard won confidence of the master. Doubt starts to creep in, and the only things he can see in his work are mistakes.

Emotions are not always rational, however, and even experienced authors who have “made it” wonder whether their work is good enough. I’ve heard of successful writers who, when they review a day’s writing, feel it is the worst thing they’ve ever read. They detest it with the kind of passion only a creator can feel about his own work.

Somehow they manage to detach themselves from this, however, to stop it from controlling them. At the end of the day, the audience is the one to determine the quality of the work. The writer’s opinion is irrelevant.

5. Procrastination

This is my favorite. For over six months now, I’ve been sitting on the completed first draft of the sequel to my novel, HIVE. It doesn’t need any rewriting, only polishing up and fleshing out.

At first I was proactive, committing several hours a day to the task. Unfortunately life has an annoying tendency of throwing things at you when you least expect it. My writing stalled. I made excuses that life was too hectic; I just needed things to settle down.

At the time my excuses were reasonable, but inaction can take on a momentum of its own. Several months passed, and life returned to normal. I realized I couldn’t rely on the same excuses anymore…so I invented new ones. I told myself I just needed a solid block of time without interruptions to get back into the swing of things.

Yeah, right. Opportunities arose, and I filled them with other commitments.

Next I told myself I didn’t have enough spare time. If I found that excuse crumbling (say because I had a couple of hours to kill), another excuse would take its place. I couldn’t concentrate. I was tired. I had a headache (seriously, do husbands still fall for that one these days?) The weeks dragged on.

Fast forward six months, and I’ve now come out of the closet and admitted I’m procrastinating. I realize the only way to address this is to throw myself back into writing. In fact, I made a New Year resolution to do just that. I haven’t started yet, but I plan to do something about it tomorrow. Or maybe the next day. Provided I haven’t got a headache.

So, I’m procrastinating about tackling my procrastination. Sound familiar? Then you have the dubious pleasure of sharing the number one reason why writers don’t write.

The good news is that there are ways to manage all of these problems, whatever your writing goals.

Please leave a comment to share what gets between you and writing, and the techniques you have learned to cope.

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By Marc Davies

Marc started writing as a teenager, and has always been obsessed with science fiction and fantasy. He has a soft spot for books with fast plots, unusual characters and twisted humor. The more unusual, the better. He predominantly reads sci-fi and fantasy, depending on mood. Marc is an active member of several writers groups, including the Online Workshop for Science Fiction, Fantasy and Horror, and maintains a blog at www.marcdavies.net. His debut book, HIVE, a sci-fi novel about a hidden community of psionicists set in contemporary London, is due for release with Burst Books in Fall 2012. He lives in an old house owned by a Golden Retriever and a Labrador, with a mountain of books, an impressive collection of half-finished wine bottles, and the occasion ball of drifting dog hair. If you have a neighbor that sits at the computer all day in a dressing gown and cackles insanely, chances are it's him.

18 thoughts on “Why Aren’t You Writing?”
  1. Brilliant article Marc! I think I fall into the Self Doubt trap most… I write something, think ‘this is alright’, read it once… ‘well, this could be better’, read it twice… ‘actually, it needs a lot of work’, read it thrice… ‘God, I’m an awful writer… I should give up!’

    1. Thanks Marc, and thanks for chosing a better title!

      I think a writer’s view of their own work definately gets worse the more they read it. This is especially true with series. Then you can’t even see it as fresh anymore.

    1. Hey Jamie

      The 10 minute thing seems like a good solution. I think that’s what I need to do to get back into the swing of things again.

  2. Great article. I too am guilty of all of those points. I’d also add another one: overcoming setbacks. I finished my novel a year ago, sent out the final draft and immediately began work on book 2. However, horror of horrors, my pc crashed, taking with it all my character descriptions, story arcs and world building. No problem, I had backed up everything, except my memory stick also failed. After sulking for a month, I began the slow process of going through my first novel, making notes on the characters etc. I did a chapter at time and a new job, new baby and a year later I’m still doing it. My blog has now become my of a book review site when I should be writing.

    1. Oh no, Rob, that’s awful!

      My computer crashed a month ago too, but fortunately I had everything backed up in a Cloud. Oh the irony of having future technology save my sci-fi writing :p

  3. I’ve been stuck on plot problems for 3 years now (been writing my first novel/series for 6). After all that time, anything I come up with doesn’t seem to fit with the large body of existing material already in the story. At this point, I don’t have any surefire techniques for success, so I’d appreciate any ideas.

    I’ve spent the last year or so trying to draft an extensive plot outline rather than spending time trying to write scenes that led nowhere (what I did the year before). At least I’m trying new things, right? The problem is that when I draft an outline for a book, I have general ideas of what should happen in certain parts (ie Character X and Character Y become friends) but have no idea of the specific scenes which will make that happen.

    So…any suggestions on how to fill beginning/middle plot and still keep a (fantastic, I-dont-want-to-touch-it) ending intact?

    1. Hi DragonGirl

      I was in the same position as you for my first novel for quite a while. I think that coming up with a plot to fit in with an ending you don’t want to change is the hardest way to write. If you think about it, plots start from the beginning and move to the end via a series of logical events. So you are effectively trying to unnaturally manufacture the cause and effect process of the events to match the ending. No wonder it seems hard!

      I found this froze me into inaction for about 5 months, and I only managed to move forward by giving up my precious ending. I still used the ending to guide me to a general idea of what I wanted to achieve, but I had to be flexible and willing to compromise before I could move forward.

      Ultimately, the ending I arived at was an improvement over what I had been holding onto anyway. Don’t be afraid to change things to move forward, because you might find that new, more satisfying opportunities present themselves in the process.

      My $0.02

  4. Self-doubt is definitely my biggest problem. Which is annoying because I recognize it yet it still cripples my progress at times. Aaaahhh!

  5. Got a brilliant, and simple, idea from YouTube. It was called The Five Minute Method.
    The deal is this: You say to yourself – even if you’re stressed, tired, or have a headache… 😉 , to just spend 5 minutes on your writing. Just five minutes.

    After those five minutes has passed I’ve found myself inspired enough to continue writing, but I never have it as a goal that I have to continue write after those minutes has passed. It’s a very simple and very efficient method. =)

  6. Wow, I’m definitely having issues right now as a self-doubting journeyman writer. Thanks for explaining it so well. While it hasn’t cured me, it is nice to at least have something to point to, that explains why I have good days and bad when it comes to editing.

  7. Great article!

    My biggest problem is procrastination. It’s easy to forget that writing takes precedence over the marketing you’re doing to get people reading what you’ve written. Thank you for the reminder. I’m now going to get offline and work on my writing goals.

    Thank you. 🙂

  8. Funny, I wrote about this very thing myself. One of the reasons I’m not writing is a fear of success. I know I’m not a brilliant writer, but I can be an entertaining one. I had a column for seven years, in fact. The thought of actually having a published book scares me. Yeah, I know. I’m weird.

  9. I’ve found that a deadline helps to keep me on track. Granted I was surprised I had a deadline, nevertheless it appears to be working. I published my first novel and my brother set up a website for me to help market it. As soon as the book was up for sale, I went to my website to show someone and discovered a countdown clock for the sequel! I was a little freaked at first (ok, still am) but it’s definitely motivation. 🙂

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